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ARC's avatar

This drew me in. I'm gonna go back to the start. You've definitely got something here with the narrator. Comes across very sharply and realistic and compelling.

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Janice Okoh's avatar

Hey, I enjoyed this. It felt very real to me. It was brutally honest storytelling. I must admit a couple of times I was shocked by its explicitness yet very intrigued by where the story is going as well as Alex's thoughts about race and difference. “and a breeze pushes through the apartment like a slow school of fish.” beautiful. I love similes and I can just see it.

I am very curious to know more about his mind. What are the voices and what are him? So will read more.

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