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Janice Okoh's avatar

Really enjoyed this. Thank you. And I learned something new about men and right and left-handed masturbation!

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Zachary Dillon's avatar

Thank you!

Haha, yeah, file away that important piece of research! I’m here to spread knowledge.

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ARC's avatar

Good opening

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Amanda Coreishy's avatar

Great start! I've got loads of e-books on my e-reader waiting to be read - many sitting there for years, so I'll probably get through your story more reliably if I read it chapter by chapter on Substack!

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Zachary Dillon's avatar

Thanks! And I’m happy the slow delivery format is helpful. I’ll be curious to see how that affects the pacing, because it could go either way, but that’s part of the fun of this experiment.

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Amanda Coreishy's avatar

You mean my experience as a reader with the pacing? I suspect it will affect the pleasure of reading and impact of the story somewhat. Reading it in such a broken-up format probably means the experience will be more cognitive than emotional, but let’s see … I’d love to find that I’m nonetheless deeply emotionally engaged!

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Zachary Dillon's avatar

I'll be curious to see! The book itself is highly cognitive and emotional, haha. Also, some of the chapters coming up are a bit longer than these first few, so you'll have a bit more time to settle into them.

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