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Alex Shifman's avatar

This was absolutely riveting. I’m deeply anxious reading through this chapter. The buildup is madness.

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Amanda Coreishy's avatar

You're really showing us his desperation here, as well as how dangerous his condition is. He's contemplating harming his 'suspects', he's not turning up for work, he's wrecked the house that probably belongs to his landlord, and to anyone witnessing him continually talking to himself, he's absolutely going mad. Looking forward to more.

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